A angry old man came up the street he looked like he had been swimming in the swamp. He had a bucket in one hand and a fishing rod in the other. He walked to the pond and sat in his old chair he flung the fishing rod then it was in the pond. In a blink of a eye he caught an orange pink fish it was so ugly so he. Put the fish back and he walked home with no supper so he came back the next day but no luck.
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You have used an excellent amount of describing words to set the scene and give us some information about your characters. Next time you might want to work on the structure of your story! Thanks for sharing
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