But the shark was right behind him! Suddenly he was in side the shakes morth he followed the disgusting smell of roting fish . The smell leed him to the stomach it was so disgusting he felt like vomiting suddenly a loud bang went of because same notey fisherman killed the shak with a b b gan the fisherman open the Sharks Mouth and captain taniwha came out and walk away.
Sophie I really enjoyed reading your story. It had so many descriptive words in it. Fantastic work!
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