Sunday 10 May 2015

Captain taniwha -what happens next?

As the Pressure of the water  is closing the door shut ,captain taniwha had to brck open the window with his heed . When he got out of the window he Gazed into the  deep blue but the shark was no where in sight.
But the shark was right behind him!   Suddenly  he was in side the shakes morth he followed the disgusting smell of roting fish . The smell leed him to the stomach it was so disgusting he felt like vomiting suddenly a loud bang went of because same notey fisherman killed the shak with a b b gan the fisherman open the Sharks Mouth and captain taniwha came out and walk away.

1 comment:

  1. Sophie I really enjoyed reading your story. It had so many descriptive words in it. Fantastic work!
    Mum

    ReplyDelete